THIS IS A FOLLOW UP OF ORDER # 196248515 ( You helped me write that two days ago)

Im required to read my classmates post and respond to it, while he also does same to mine. I have attached his post as a PDF.

    Follow-up response must either add to the argument or present an alternate point of view.
    Follow-ups will be graded on the substance of the response; and the depth of insight included
        in the response.