This assignment was completed, the grade I received was not a passing one. I have attached the feedback on the 3 areas that need to be expounded on. When you add more to each area it should not take more than 1 page total when adding it all up.

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For this assessment, you will analyze the stakeholders that Vila Health Independence Medical Center must recognize as it adjusts to, changes, upgrades and implements your recommendations to the EHR or HIM systems. You will want to refer to the recommendations you made in the first assessment as well as any feedback that you have received from your instructor.

For this deliverable, you will write a 35-page executive summary detailing your previous recommendations and how you timeline for them. Additionally, you will analyze how your recommendations impact considerations such as resource allocation, training, and workflow changes, as well as best practices for overcoming implementation barriers. Finally, you will complete the Stakeholder Matrix Template, and align critical success factors with the primary internal and external stakeholders. Include a value statement for each stakeholder (A value statement meets the needs and values of each key decision maker. See example in the Stakeholder Matrix Template.)

For this assessment, you will be evaluated on the following criteria:

Describe the relevant stakeholders related to an impact analysis.
Explain the process used to arrive at recommendations related to a health information management system.
Describe a timeline for implementing recommendations related to a health information management system.
Analyze the impact of recommendations on relevant stakeholders and an organization with relation to considerations such as patient outcomes, new training, resource allocation, and workflow changes.
Analyze best practices to overcome barriers in creating buy-in from stakeholders and implementation related to recommendations.
Develop value statements for relevant stakeholder groups related to critical success factors and recommendations related to a health information management system.
This criterion relates to the Stakeholder Matrix Template.
Communicate analysis of stakeholders and value of recommendations in a manner that is clear and concise.
Integrate relevant sources to support assertions, correctly formatting citations and references using current APA style.
Additional Requirements

Your analysis should meet the following requirements:

Written communication: Written communication is free of errors that detract from the overall message.
APA formatting: Resources and citations are formatted according to the current APA style and formatting standards.
Number of resources: 35 peer-reviewed resources from scholarly journal articles.
Length: 35 typed, double-spaced pages, excluding the title page and reference page. You do not need to write an abstract for this assessment. Include the Stakeholder Matrix Template as an Appendix.
Appendix: Include stakeholder chart and value statements as an appendix to your analysis.
Font and font size: Times New Roman, 12 point.