Chapter II is missing 4 pages. Incorporate more literature review and expertise on method and design conducted in prior studies use Cheney’s method & design located throughout the study. Take the ones used already throughout the paper and make it all flow together. Make sure topics and subtopics flow together. Paper needs to be no less than 30 pages not including references. See below recommended edits from DBA chair and make corrections. There is already a total of 27 pages add 4 more on Cheney’s method & design. Please highlight all additions and changes made.

Chapter 2  is also missing the expertise on method and design conducted in prior studies (there is some throughout, but the flow makes it hard to pick which references to add to a Method and Design Literature section). There are still APA heading and citation concerns throughout, which will not prevent defense. See attachments for guidance.