Please edit paper with additional writing/rewrite where you see fit. Fix grammar/spelling/punctuation/etc.

Write an introduction with thesis statement, it is academic writing. Rewrite parts of the paper into a more argumentative essay

The topic revolves around peoples willingness to ignore painful truths and the Limits of Free Will. Please include how the author’s technique contributes to this. thank you! Please revise and edit for a formal high level language paper.  Add details and provide deep support to each paragraph.