You have written this paper for me, and she has given me feedback. Please correct all the feedbacks for me and please make sure to make it less than 2500 words. It has a word limit of 2500. We cannot cross 2500 words excluding title and work cited. It has to be in APA format.
Here is the feedback from the professor

This paper is in the ‘draft’ stage, but it’s not clear what your paper is about (you will need titles and subtitles). Also,  there are a lot of definitions. Be careful that you are not reciting facts, that someone can do like a Google search. Professional writing is in the third person, not first person (‘I wanted to write this paper because  . . . ‘ )

What I am looking for is the majority of the paper being ‘your’ conclusion and analysis of all the research you collected.