I really enjoyed reading your outline. You have many good points here. And I like the general direction of the outline. Here are a few things to consider when moving forward: Thesis: I’m not clear on what your thesis is here. You also need three subtopic
Below is the Feedback given from professor for Final draft. Please let me know if you are up for the task. I really enjoyed reading your outline. You have many good points here. And I like the general direction of the outline.Here are a few things to consider when moving …